Valentine Poem for Emily and William
You grew inside me
For nine long months
We cried and laughed
Watching that little bump
It expanded and bloomed
Like some abstract view
This gift from God
The miracle of you
Blessed by love
Not once, but twice
Some puppy dog tails,
Lots of sugar and spice
Rich beyond dreams
With the sought after pair
Our family complete
No more room to spare
Each one of you posessing
The power to hold,
The capacity to sustain us
As we grow old
Forever engraved
Right from the start
Created through love
Upon our hearts
FT&PD
Suz
Right back at you Suzanne!!
Love ya Mom & Dad
Love you guys to Mom and Dad <3
Suz
very beautiful Suzanne! You always had a knack with words and writing!
Aww thank you Kathryn, I appreciate that. I have been thinking a lot about other forms of writing, but poetry can be very personal ( and hard to write, depending on the subject), but it is also cathartic and freeing in some respects. This one felt right
Hope all is well in your world!
Suz
Suzanne,
A beautiful, beautiful poem! Your heart is in every line, so lovely and loving.
A gift to Emily and William.
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Thank you so much Brenda, I appreciate it and that is exactly how I felt. It was hard to put into the right words and I still feel it is inadequate, but I am new to poetry, LOL. Hopefully there will be more for me to share down the road
Suz
So beautiful and heartfelt. You are a wonderful writer Suzanne!
Aww, thanks so much MaryBeth, I appreciate that
I have not dabbled in the poetry field that much and usually when I do I keep it private, but this one meant a lot to me so…
Hope all is well with you in the frozen North!
Suz
Such a Beautiful Poem .. what lucky Child to have such loving Parents. “Created out of Love” was my favorite part
Suzane this is such a beautiful poem. It reminds me how grateful we should be to our parents.
Great poem from a Mom. Such a great mom. they’d love to read this.
Such a great time to remind people that valentines is for everyone. Coz everyone has got a family. EVeryone has someone who loved them. Now, I miss my mom…
That was so sweet. thoughts that comes from a loving mom.
What a lovely poem! I hope your children will get to read this. Mom’s love is really something different.
Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.
Truly blessed child with mom like you.
Beautiful poem for your children, simple yet heartfelt words. Each day with the one you love is and should be Valentine’s Day.
That’s a lovely poem; it seems to really convey your true feelings. You just made me miss writing poems!
Nice! The poem reminds me of high school. I shut down everybody and just start writing poems on my notebook or anywhere. It’s something I do most of the time, even more than talking to people!
What a very sweet idea and beautifully written! Sim @ simslife.co.uk x
What a sweet poem. Love is in the air…
Such a sweet nice romantic lovely poem beautifully written!~ Happy valentine’s day!
What a lovely poem! It is a very precious gift, from the heart <3
very touching and sweet poem. you really have a talent.
Who’s Emily and William? I thought it’s a beautiful poem you wrote and I actually hope to know more about them so that I can appreciate the poem more. Thanks for the beautiful words!
What a beautiful heartfelt poem for Emily and William. I’m impressed by the length and the sweetness of it. I hope they get to read it too.
I feel inspired to write such an awesome and touching poem of love to my two kids. They are the true love of my life and have a place in my heart no man could replace.
Wow this is so sweet and brilliant. Thanks for sharing it with us. Happy Valentine to you too.
I just love it,touching
I had t come back and read this again,Suzane this is such a beautiful poem it so touches my heart.I have shared on FB for my family and friends to enjoy.
This is a fabulous poem, do you do creative writing often or did you go to school for it because you sound well practiced. I haven’t got a creative bone in me but I always wished I did but my biggest talent is comedian. At least I can get people to laugh !
You certainly have am amazing talent,this is so beautiful !